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“CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND”


CONCEPT and STORY by: ADRIAN COETZER AND DEESHAN MOODLEY
STORYBOARD BY: ADRIAN COETZER




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Thando lies stabbed in an alley (he is 18years old)
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camera pulls back
cut to Thando looking at the sky and a figure of a warrior appears
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fade to black
An african baby (Thando) crawls along a path in a forest with lots of leaves and light rays cutting thru the trees
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as he crawls he grows and starts to walk, stumbles then continues to walk along the path
with rapid CGI growth he is now about 5 years old and running along the path (alot like the evolution of humankind).
We are now following him from behind
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Thando hears a noise behind him, he stops, turns and glances over the terrain for a second
(he know that there is something following him)
LONG SHOT. We view Thando from behind a shrub as if it’s the view of someone watching him,
THANDO recognizes something (while looking into the camera)
he runs away –camera follows from watching position (pushes thru the shrubs)… camera gains on him
as he is about to be caught he pushes thru the bushes
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steps through into a clearing
A car stops in a busy street, cars are rushing by, Thando is stunned, he is wearing an old shorts, tshirt.
car passes and driver shouts at him
Mama (grandmother) comes running in hysterics
camera pulls back to show that they are in a big city
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Mama has a word with Thando
even though she is old she finds the strenght to walk him back to safety
Mama reminds Thando that he's in alot of trouble for playing in the street
Thundo looks into the bushes
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something looks back at him...

in the beginning Thando plays hide and seek with the 'shadow'/warrior as he is young and has less fear but as he grows we see that he becomes more afraid - as we all do

cut to title | approx. 117min
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Thando and Mama jump into a twelve seater taxi, however the taxi is over the passenger limit, there is a song blaring on the background.
Due to space constraints Thando needs to cramp himself against a fat lady. The fat lady is dressed in old worn out clothing, she is eating a fried mealie (corn cob) - eating it slowly.
Thando and Mama are walking in sand tracks in an open field, the field has big trees. Mama is walking with difficulty. Thando is walking next to Mama jumping up and down and swaying his arms in the air.
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Thando and Mama walk to Solomon, thin old man with a scruffy beard. He is sitting behind a counter of an old shack. There is a sign hanging above the shack. SOLOMONS GENERAL DEALER, written in hand script. The shack looks old and worn out there are cans and bread on display. Thando streches to see over counter.
Exterior of shack
Thando and girl fetching water
Thando washing hands and face before dinner
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Mama gives Thando some of her food
Thando and Mama talk about his father
Thando sleeps
Thando dream sequence
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Dream Sequence - warrior
Thando dream sequence

Thando dreams of his father leaving him - this is followed thru by Thando also running away from issues rather than staying and dealing with them
Thando wakes up from dream sequence

Mama wakes Thando up and they talk about bad dreams
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Mama gives Thando some money to by food
Thando buys bread and sees a boy in an alley on his way back
The boy is suffering and hungry
Thando gives Simphiwe the bread
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Thando calls out for help but no one hears him
Simphiwe eats the food and Thando tells him that his grandmother will help
Mama askes where the bread is and Thando tells her that he gave it to Simphiwe because he needed it more than them

note: advertising spot available on lamp post to fund production

Thando begs for some money
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a kind lady gives Thando some change
Thando buys some more bread and gives it to Mama
Thando is playing with his sword and fighting his dragon
a shadow of the warrior appears as a shadow in the corner of the room
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Thando is scared and calls out to Mama
Mama speaks to him about his ancestors and that he must respect them